Thursday, May 17, 2012
Peer Review for The End Of Overeating
Hi Kimon, I liked your blog discussing fast food and the everyday addictive ingredients we are exposed to that can be posed similar to dangerous addictive illegal drugs. However when reading I was curious and interested in learning more about what previous information you discussed in class, a brief description may help spark more ideas and link what other topics you mentioned in your blog, and also describing what concentrated animal feeding operation systems are and CAFO? I would suggest rereading your blog to make sure the words fit properly together for example plural words. Overall your blog was good and leaves me wanting to read more about the end of overeating.
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