Hi Kimon, I am a student in Professor Coopers Eng. 101
class. I watched the “From Farm to Fridge” video and read your blog entry. Your
opening paragraph was well put together, I really liked it, and I liked how you
compared the factories to an “auto chop shop”. Your second paragraph really
sums up how each animal is ill-treated and abused. I would suggest stating how
each animal is physically abused, whether being smacked around, pounded etc.,
instead of saying “All of these animals are physically abused by being smacked
around, pounded, kicked, burned and stabbed before their death”. The third
paragraph was a bit confusing, with how Gail A. Eisnitz ties in and plays a
role with the video? Overall I think your blog entry conveys the essential ideas
of the video and creates great imagery.
-Shabana
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