In this blog I will discuss the introduction of Walter
Mosley's Workin on the Chain Gang. Mosley is discussing the chains we have
attached to ourselves, regardless of skin color. When some would only think
only African Americans are oppressed with chains. Mosley states “decisions are
made by governments in concert with corporations that are designed to increase
profit and influence, not to advance humanitarian end” (Mosley 3). The keyword
of this statement is describing capitalism.
Governments and corporations are linked to increase beneficiary support
for one another whether it is power and or money. The consideration for
everyday society is not important, somewhat on the bottom of the barrel. We are being controlled by these two affairs.
We are working as their slaves, they have the hold and control over us. They
say who, what, where, when, why and how much we get paid. Mosley states “The economic system, the system that rules so
much of our lives, does not, probably cannot, value human labor above any other
commodity or resource. Under the weight of this system a man’s labor is no more
valuable than its equivalent cost in pounds of potatoes” (Mosley 12). This
quotation is important because it’s describing how appreciated we are. We are
just working laborer units nothing more nothing less in the eye of corporate society.
There is no principle and justice when it comes to power and the dollar sign.
So regardless of skin color in today’s society we are salves in one way or
other, we have chains attached to corporations or government.
Hi Shabana, I'm Evan from Prof. Cooper's ENG 220 class. I really like what you're talking about; the corporations and governments empowerment over it's people. The one thing that might help you is that when you insert a quotation it's very important to state that the author is saying it. In essay's you shouldn't begin a sentence with just the quotation. You should introduce the quote to the reader so they know it's from the book or passage that your getting the information. For example "On this page, Mosley said/ stated..." This gives more information so it's clear to the reader that it's a quote from someone and not just dropped there.
ReplyDeleteThe next sentence after the quote, is a bit confusing because it makes the reader think that your "for" the empowerment of the people. If you take that sentence out the following sentence works perfectly because it backs up the quote entirely. Your writing is very well put together, and thorough. One very small critic is watch out for the two misspelled words. Besides that, Great Job.
Sincerely,
Evan M.